By Dan Walsh
We've all done it. You’re reading a novel that’s
captured your interest and, before long, you find yourself skipping several
paragraphs to find “where the story picks up again.” The writer writes well.
That’s not the problem. The problem is they write too much. Sprinkled
throughout the interesting, exciting parts you find a lot of blah-blah-blah.
Like you, my life is pretty busy. When I get to read
fiction, I do it to be refreshed and entertained. If a book has too much
blah-blah-blah, I put it down for good. Guess what I don’t do after that? I don’t recommend it to others and, likely,
won’t buy another book from this author. Neither of these are good things.
I’ve published 8 novels in the last 4 years, most
with Revell. My novels have received hundreds of customer reviews on Amazon (most
are 4-5 Stars). Perhaps the most consistent comment I get (and one of the most
encouraging) is: “I couldn’t put it down.”
That’s
the reaction an author wants from his/her readers, no matter what genre you
write in. Readers who feel this way about your book, will tell others and buy
your other books. Agents and editors will offer you more contracts.
As I look back I realize that some, if not a good
deal of my success, ties back to my favorite writing quote by NY Times
bestselling crime author, Elmore Leonard; “In your writing, try to leave out the parts
readers skip.”
I latched onto this advice and have followed it ever
since, not just when I write but especially when I edit my work. Here are 3
practical tips I’ve learned about getting rid of the parts readers skip before
sending in your manuscript.
1.
See Research as a Spice, not a Main Ingredient
Whether we write historical fiction or contemporary,
research is a part of our writing life. We should be devoted to it if our
stories are going to come across with relevance and credibility. But our
tendency is to imagine that all these fascinating details will be as
interesting to our readers as they are for us. It’s not true. Really, it’s not.
Figure that 90% of your research will be blah-blah-blah to your readers. You
spent all that time for the 10% you put into your book.
2. Descriptions? We Don’t Need No Stinking Descriptions
We are writing books for people who live today, not
fifty years ago. We live in a video/visual generation. Most of our readers have
watched hundreds if not thousands of movies and TV shows. Most of the words we write
describing locations or what our characters look like are wasted. After a few
lines our readers have already formed pictures in their heads and skip past
everything else we say.
3.
Resist Over-Explaining
At a social gathering, have you ever found yourself
stuck in the gravitational pull of someone who talks too much? Don’t you hate
that? Sadly, many writers suffer from the same malady. Not with our speech but
with our pen.
Say what needs to be said well, but only once.
Resist the urge to explain the same thing over and over again to your readers
in different ways. It’s all just blah-blah-blah.
Learn to view the cutting room floor as your good
friend. Think of it this way: the words lying there needed to be written so the
better words could find their way. That’s the only thing that should wind up in
our books, the better words.
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