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Showing posts with label The Flight Attendant. Show all posts

July 4, 2019

Freedom to Write Your Way




By Annette Cole Mastron, Communications Director for Southern Writers Magazine



In my last blog post, Writing the Messy Protagonist, I promised to write about “writer rule breaking.” In that post on June 20, 2019 I wrote, “I recently flew through, The Flight Attendant by Chris Bohjalian. The story was quite turbulent from the first page. I was attracted to Bohjalian’s writer rule breaking of telling the story without much dialogue. This “writer rule-breaking” I’ll save for another blog post.” Well today is the day. 

Chris Bohjalian tells his compelling story in sections. In the first section he tells the story without much dialogue. Twenty pages in, I said to myself, “wait doesn’t this author know the writer rules?” I rocket-read to “The End.” I closed the book and said to myself, “well that Chris Bohjalian knows how to tell a story and break some of the hard line writer rules.” The main one: show, don’t tell. He masterfully tells the first section of the book primarily through the thoughts of his messy protagonist as she wakes up.

Researching this blog post I ran across a post on titled, “6 Writing “Rules” that Even Bestselling Authors Break.” Here is the link to Better Novel Project blog post. All the rule breaking authors mentioned in this blog post I have enjoyed reading. Chris Bohjalian has 20 successful books under his belt. One of his books Midwives was an Oprah book club pick that has been made into a play. Actually, he has turned three of his books into plays. The point is Chris has turned “writer rule breaking” into a success. 

Today is America’s Birthday! Join with me and celebrate the “Freedom to Write Your Way,” it could be the key to YOUR success.


June 20, 2019

Writing the Messy Protagonist



By Annette Cole Mastron, Communications Director for Southern Writers Magazine


I recently flew through, The Flight Attendant by Chris Bohjalian. The story was quite turbulent from the first page. I was attracted to Bohjalian’s writer rule breaking of telling the story without much dialogue. This “writer rule-breaking” I’ll save for another blog post.

I was intrigued by Bohjalian’s flight attendant protagonist. Flat out, she’s without a doubt one of the messiest protagonists I’ve read about. Her risky behavior paired with her alcoholic promiscuity does not present as character traits that would appeal to readers as a protagonist. 

After reading Chris’s book, I decided she made for one of the most interesting protagonists, I’ve read recently. There were times I hated the stupidity of this character, but I stuck with her and she won me over. After all, everyone in real life is flawed, so why wouldn’t our characters in a book be flawed?

Some author’s protagonists have problems they resolve throughout the book’s story. Often, a weak protagonist is saved by another character which I find a yawner and not authentic. I’m not a fan of reading about the “knight saving the day on a white horse.”

Kristen Kieffer writes on the blog, Well-Storied and has a great article on “33 Ways to Write Stronger Characters.” You can view the article in its entirety at this link. 
Here’s Kristen’s character list is:
“-GIVE THEM A GOAL
-GIVE THEM A MOTIVATION
-GIVE THEM PURPOSE
-GIVE THEM A FEAR
-GIVE THEM A FLAW
-GIVE THEM A HISTORY
-GIVE THEM A PRESENT STORY
-GIVE THEM A PERSONALITY
-GIVE THEM INTERESTS
-GIVE THEM A QUIRK
-GIVE THEM A NAME
-GIVE THEM A DESIRE
-GIVE THEM A LOVE
-GIVE THEM AGENCY
-MAKE THEM COMPLEX
-MAKE THEM UNIQUE
-MAKE THEM RELATABLE
-MAKE THEM FAIL
-MAKE THEM SUFFER
-MAKE THEM SWEAT
-FIND THEIR IDENTITY
-FIND THEIR PERSPECTIVE
-FIND THEIR TYPE
-FIND THEIR LANGUAGE
-FIND THEIR ATTITUDE
-FIND THEIR HAPPY PLACE
-FIND THEIR SUPPORT
-FIND THEIR GUT
-FIND THEIR BANE
-FIND THEIR REFUGE
-FIND THEIR REDEMPTION
-FIND THEIR GLORY
-FIND THEIR STORY”

It’s not a surprise that Chris Bohjalian’s, flight attendant protagonist had each one of these attributes for his character. She’s just a mess, who you loathe one minute and sympathize with the next minute. 

So what do you do to keep readers interested in your protagonist? How messy are they?